Some Stuff About Kissing
I am the worst person to write a kiss scene.
This could be because I’m a thriller writer and, as such, am better suited to
gore and stalkers. But, probably (definitely), it’s because I’m me and I’m
neurotic. There’s just so much to think about it when you’re writing them.
Stuff like, Is the hero sufficiently into
this? Or, my personal favorite, Is
this sexy…or assault?
It’s a fine line, people.
Plus, kiss scenes are hard to write. No
really, they are. You have to consider logistics, emotions, and your hero’s
ability to verb the heroine’s noun without sounding gross. See? These are all
things that give me terror sweats. The final fight scene in REMEMBER ME, the
sequel to FIND ME, took a few hours to write. That last kiss scene with Griff?
It took days.
It’d be so much easier if I could just
type “And then they sucked face.” But y’all don’t want to read that and neither
do I. You know who I could read again and again though?
Yeah, I know. You don’t care, but I’m in
a sharing mood. It’s probably all the carbs I’ve been loading lately. Side
note: I enjoy saying “carb loading.” It makes me sound like I’m preparing for a
marathon rather than worrying about the upcoming release of REMEMBER ME. I am a
big fan of frosting. Big. Fan. And sandwiches. Those are good too.
And now my side note has turned into a
full-fledged digression. For those of you playing along at home, this is
surprising no one.
Okay, back to writers who amaze me. In
no particular order, let’s start with…
Rainbow Rowell. If you have not read
ELEANOR AND PARK, there is something seriously wrong with you. Kidding! But
really why? Why? Why do you hurt me like this? All I want to do is share
the awesomeness that is Eleanor and her Park. Rowell’s kissing scenes are so
well done—not only because she’s a beautiful writer, but also because the
tension leading up to that kiss is perfectly rendered.
Sherry Thomas. Okay, confession: I have
not read THE BURNING SKY…yet. I discovered Thomas back when she was
writing historicals and they were amaze-balls. The emotional angst between the
hero and heroine in PRIVATE ARRANGEMENTS was like a gut-punch. In the absolute
best way. When the h/h finally kiss, you want to cheer…and cry because there’s
so much damage between them.
Simone Elkeles. Actually, I’m going to
have to say that again, Simone Elkeles. Can we say PERFECT CHEMISTRY? Yes. We.
Can. How about CHAIN REACTION? Yep. Enough said.
Although now I have to sit down. Y’all are
going to have to give me a second.
Okay. Am better now.
So those are some of my favorite authors,
but because I’m still filled with the spirit of sharing (or cake pops, it’s a
toss up really) I’m adding one of my favorite kiss scenes from FIND ME. I am
not Rainbow Rowell, Sherry Thomas, or Simone Elkeles, but I hope you enjoy it.
****
“We should probably get going,”
I say.
“Sure thing.” Griff
starts to ease closer and I freeze. “But we don’t have to rush off.
I have my bike. It’ll take less than twenty minutes to get to Joe’s.”
“I…I…” I don’t know what to say. We’re only
inches apart now and my brain has stalled. Griff’s body slides lower along mine
and I have to stifle a gasp. He still smells like grass and chlorine from last
night and his hair has dried in messy spikes.
Griff smiles and, for a second, I think
he’s going to kiss me again, but he turns his head so his whispers rush past my
ear, making my skin leap like it’s electrified. “I like waking up to you,
Wicked.”
I dig my fingers into the covers so I don’t
dig them into him. “I thought you were awake because I kept kicking you.”
“Yeah, you were.” Griff’s hand drifts up,
up, up my neck until it’s cupping my jaw. “But, mostly, I was up because I
wanted to do this.”
His lips press against corner of my jaw…my
cheek…my mouth. I roll into him and he pushes me down, pins me to the bed.
“Again,” he breathes.
****
As always, a huge thank you to Kayla at Bibliophilic
Nerds for having me. Thanks for reading and I hope everyone enjoys FIND ME!!
*fans self* Goodness that scene was.. wow. You may say you can't write kissing scenes but I beg to defer! That was all kinds of amazing.
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I had forgotten about that scene! (sounds like I need to re-read Find Me).
ReplyDeleteI actually haven't read Eleanor and Park yet, but I did read Fangirl!